The graph below shows the number of enquiries to tourist information office made by telephone, letter/email and in person from January 2001 to 2001.

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The graph below shows the number of enquiries to tourist information office made by telephone, letter/email and in person from January 2001 to 2001.

The line chart depicts the information about number of enquiries to tourist information office in 2001. At a glance, it is observed that, most of people enquiries were held by telephone from first month of year to June month. In first month, 400 enquiries to tourist information office collected by in person. On the other hand, 800 people were connected with tourist office bu telephone and 200 less than telephone people were enquiried to tourist information office through email and letters. Further,after January in person number of enquiries were dramatically rise with 400 more enquiries till March months. However, number of enquiries that were held by telephone as well as email and letters were static in January to March month with mild fluctuations. Ironically, it is seen that after March month email and letters did not observed enquiries and it reached at 200

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... to tourist information office in 2001. At a glance, it is observed that, most o...
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... At a glance, it is observed that, most of people enquiries were held by telephone from f...
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...nnected with tourist office bu telephone and 200 less than telephone people were ...
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...ffice through email and letters. Further,after January in person number of enquiries w...
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...n number of enquiries were dramatically rise with 400 more enquiries till March mont...
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.... However, number of enquiries that were held by telephone as well as email and ...
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...ver, number of enquiries that were held by telephone as well as email and letter...
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...y telephone as well as email and letters were static in January to March month wi...
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...r March month email and letters did not observed enquiries and it reached at 200
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...observed enquiries and it reached at 200
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, so, well, as well as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 731.0 965.302439024 76% => OK
No of words: 143.0 196.424390244 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11188811189 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.45807182446 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70742283234 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 75.0 106.607317073 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524475524476 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 222.3 283.868780488 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.983208092 43.030603864 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.428571429 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4285714286 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.85714285714 5.23603664747 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331115450481 0.215688989381 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.178327751986 0.103423049105 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0918994410542 0.0843802449381 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.331115450481 0.15604864568 212% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.73 8.06136585366 83% => OK
difficult_words: 19.0 40.7170731707 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Minimum two paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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