The graph below shows the number of male and female students studying IT at university from 1985-2015.

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The graph below shows the number of male and female students studying IT at university from 1985-2015.

The line graph below illustrate the number of man and woman pupils studying IT at university from 1985 to 2015.

In 1985 male students start studying about 5.000 pupil and female pupils start educate at university nearly 0,1 student. Becoming in 1995 given information for male student shows a little increase by 10.000 at that time female students slightly rise to 4000 in 1990 and from 1990 to 2005 reached a peak with 25500 students. Male students climbed from 1995 to 2015 about 40000 pupil. There are given information about female in high write down 30500 pupil but after that plummet in 25800 pupil.

Generally a male students studying IT university almost increased but female students started with a low indication and in the middle of period pick up but becoming at the end of period in 2015 again declined

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'graphs'.
Suggestion: graphs
The line graph below illustrate the number of man and ...
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Line 3, column 377, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'pupil' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'pupils'.
Suggestion: pupils
...s climbed from 1995 to 2015 about 40000 pupil. There are given information about fema...
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Line 3, column 450, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'pupil' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'pupils'.
Suggestion: pupils
...n about female in high write down 30500 pupil but after that plummet in 25800 pupil. ...
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Line 3, column 488, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'pupil' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'pupils'.
Suggestion: pupils
...0 pupil but after that plummet in 25800 pupil. Generally a male students studying ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 681.0 965.302439024 71% => OK
No of words: 140.0 196.424390244 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86428571429 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.43979062825 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33687170973 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 82.0 106.607317073 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585714285714 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 196.2 283.868780488 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.4989615683 43.030603864 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.5 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3333333333 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 5.23603664747 10% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.518394755262 0.215688989381 240% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.262497935242 0.103423049105 254% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.138720548844 0.0843802449381 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.371089167202 0.15604864568 238% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0973961769538 0.0819641961636 119% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 40.7170731707 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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