The line graph represents how many foreigners visiting the coast, the mountains and the lakes in a specific nation in Europe from 1987 to 2007.
Overall, the number of inter tourists choosing these three areas as their destination for their holiday was higher and higher. Among them, the coast was the most attractive tourist attraction over the years shown except the year 2022.
In 1987, starting at 40.000 people, the coast attracted the highest number of people. This figure was 4 times higher than that of the lakes. From 1987 to 1992, while there was a slight decrease in the quantity of travelers to the coast, the opposite trend was for the lakes. From 1992 onwards, the coast witnessed a dramatic rise to about 75 thousand in 2007 and became the most favorite destination of the foreign visitors. On the contrary, after enormous jump to reach the peak at about 75 thousand visitors, the lakes experienced a steeply drop to 50 thousand in 2007.
With reference to the mountains, In 1987 with 20 thousand, the mountain ranked the second after the coast in the number of foreign travelers. Over the period of 20 years, there was a considerable fluctuation in this figure. In the final year, I lost its attraction and became the least favorite destination of people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 533, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('steeply') instead an adjective, or a noun ('drop') instead of another adjective.
...housand visitors, the lakes experienced a steeply drop to 50 thousand in 2007. With reference...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, while, as for, on the contrary, with reference to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1059.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 218.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85779816514 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52330689514 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550458715596 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 300.6 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 3.36585365854 297% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.6631930001 43.030603864 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.2727272727 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8181818182 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.54545454545 5.23603664747 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112196304908 0.215688989381 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.042047511748 0.103423049105 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0403865028643 0.0843802449381 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0743024771723 0.15604864568 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0240944943439 0.0819641961636 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.2329268293 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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