The graph below shows the numbers of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six month period in 2011

In 2011, a Tourist Information Office made a statistic revolving around the number of enquiries that were received, and how they were received, all of it over a six-month period. The enquiries made in person and by telephone were seeing a rapid increase over the months, in contrast, the enquiries made by letter/email were going through a huge decline.

The enquiries made in person peaked in the month of June with approximately 1900 enquiries made. Similarily, the enquiries made by telephone also peaked in the month of June with approximately 1600 enquiries made.On the other hand, the enquiries made by letter/email were facing an all time low during the months of June and May, with approximately 400 enquiries made respectively. Moreover, the enquiries made by letter/email peaked at the month of January with approximately 750 enquiries.

During the month of February, the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office were almost identical across all communication methods.

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Average: 6.7 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 214, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: On
... with approximately 1600 enquiries made.On the other hand, the enquiries made by l...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, may, moreover, so, in contrast, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 849.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 158.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37341772152 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08378566327 2.65546596893 116% => OK
Unique words: 72.0 106.607317073 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.455696202532 0.547539520022 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 271.8 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.2038942116 43.030603864 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.5 112.824112599 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3333333333 22.9334400587 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.16666666667 5.23603664747 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254555834257 0.215688989381 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.165346311331 0.103423049105 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105116431416 0.0843802449381 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217727464226 0.15604864568 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0752220510243 0.0819641961636 92% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.2329268293 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 61.2550243902 60% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.3012195122 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 11.4140731707 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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