The line graph provide the information about population in four different nations, during the period 1970 to 2030. The graph calibrated in percentage.
Overall, it is clearly seen that, there were show a increasing trend in all four countries and they are expected to reach the highest percentages in 2030.
According to the line graph China and India, both countries starting with 20 percent in 1970 and after that China made a huge increases in their population in 2010 and it will be almost 70 percent in 2030. Similarly, The number of people rose rapidly in India Just over 30 percent in 2010 and it will remain stable in 2030. USA and Korea started with 40 and 70 percent respectively, and they will reach the hightest population with 90 percent at the end. In contrast this portion is 3 times more than in India.
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: Thaopham
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 51, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...t is clearly seen that, there were show a increasing trend in all four countries ...
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Line 3, column 127, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'increase'?
Suggestion: increase
...n 1970 and after that China made a huge increases in their population in 2010 and it will...
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Line 3, column 458, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: contrast,
...pulation with 90 percent at the end. In contrast this portion is 3 times more than in In...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, similarly, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 677.0 965.302439024 70% => OK
No of words: 144.0 196.424390244 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70138888889 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.46410161514 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52990409653 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604166666667 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 193.5 283.868780488 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.2479759125 43.030603864 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.7142857143 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5714285714 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.71428571429 5.23603664747 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152745949175 0.215688989381 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0702237633089 0.103423049105 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0415499149762 0.0843802449381 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109716141305 0.15604864568 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0300364099126 0.0819641961636 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.2329268293 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 61.2550243902 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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