The line chart illustrates the shifting trends in the proportion of households’ utilization of distinct modern technologies in homes in the UK from 1996-1997 to 2002-2003.
Overall, the rate of CD players used in families was highest while the figure for internet access was lowest over the period shown. It is noticeable that there was an upward trend in all the given technologies.
In 1996-1997, CD players accounted for the highest percentage of contemporary technological products used in homes, reaching approximately 60%. In the same year, roughly 30% of households in the UK employed a home computer, which is half the figure for CD players, 11% higher than that of mobile phones.
From that time onward, the rate of CD players and home computers usage experienced a similar growth of roughly 22% over the course of 6 years. In the same pattern, the proportion of mobile phones rose remarkably to about 44% in the first half of the period of 1998 to 2001, before remaining unchanged in the last half. Furthermore, the year 2003 witnessed a significant increase at 70% in the rate of home computer usage in homes, which is 13% higher than the figure for home computers. Meanwhile, the rate of internet usage underwent the fastest growth of 30% in a span of 4 years in comparison to others.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 50, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'was the highest'.
Suggestion: was the highest
...the rate of CD players used in families was highest while the figure for internet access wa...
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Line 2, column 99, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'was the lowest'.
Suggestion: was the lowest
...st while the figure for internet access was lowest over the period shown. It is noticeable...
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Line 4, column 56, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'computers'' or 'computer's'?
Suggestion: computers'; computer's
...onward, the rate of CD players and home computers usage experienced a similar growth of r...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1083.0 965.302439024 112% => OK
No of words: 221.0 196.424390244 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90045248869 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89634470978 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542986425339 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 318.6 283.868780488 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.2536797306 43.030603864 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.333333333 112.824112599 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5555555556 22.9334400587 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 5.23603664747 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129471933453 0.215688989381 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.050715290694 0.103423049105 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0440002755535 0.0843802449381 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.084578644008 0.15604864568 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0469497232819 0.0819641961636 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.2329268293 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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