The line graph illustrates the demographic information of Chile in three age groups (0 to 14 years. 15 to 64 years, and 65 years and older) from 1975 to 2035. It can be seen from the graph that the population of the age group between 15 and 64 years old has accounted for the most significant proportion of Chileans and fluctuated in the period shown. Meanwhile, the portion of citizens under 14 years has plummeted considerably and is predicted to continue to decrease. In contrast, there has been an upward trend in the percentage of the oldest group and this figure is expected to get even bigger.
From 1975 to 2015, the rate of the oldest citizens as stood at 5 percent and gradually went up to 10 percent. Despite being much smaller than the other groups, it is expected to grow steadily and end the period at 15 percent. By contrast, the figure for people under 14-year-old declined from nearly 40 percent to only 20 percent in 2016 and is anticipated to remain in dropping until the end of the period.
When it comes to the group of people between 15 and 64 years, there was a remarkable rise from nearly 52 percent to 70 percent in 2015. However, It is projected to get smaller between 2015 and 2035, ending the period at 60 percent.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 33.7804878049 139% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1060.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 234.0 196.424390244 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52991452991 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5524378547 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 106.607317073 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547008547009 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 297.0 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2029727518 43.030603864 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.3636363636 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2727272727 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.81818181818 5.23603664747 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191231988777 0.215688989381 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0755589804728 0.103423049105 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0806882757292 0.0843802449381 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101233456282 0.15604864568 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107945081075 0.0819641961636 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 11.4140731707 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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