The line graph depicts the information about populations estimate for India China since the year 2000 and predicted population increased until 2050.
After analyzing, it can be seen clearly that in 2000 India populations only one billion but the China population was near about 1.2 billion. In contrast, after the ten years grow citizens in India almost 1.2 billions and china again highest society near about 1.4 billions. In the 2020 year community less from the China near 1.3 billions and China then rise public mostly near 1.4 billions.
The chart further collates that in 2030 populations will be same near 1.5 billions in both nations. Now, the next ten years in China citizens will be less near 1.4 billions but in India society will be increased near about 1.6 billions. In 2050 year in India community will be increased 1.4 billions and in china reduce 1.6 billions.
Overall, in all years populations expand and decreased but in former years India populations decline and next years China populations will be decreased.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, then, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 869.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 171.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08187134503 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47322103139 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 79.0 106.607317073 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.461988304094 0.547539520022 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 244.8 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 19.8352590102 43.030603864 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 108.625 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.375 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 5.23603664747 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265641507015 0.215688989381 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.157780897547 0.103423049105 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.129492586687 0.0843802449381 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.237948213685 0.15604864568 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.138763352585 0.0819641961636 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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