The graph below shows populations figures for India and China since the year 2000 and predicted population growth up until 2050.
Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The given chart illustrates how has the population in two large countries being India and China changed since the beginning of twenty-one century and also makes a prediction until 2050. Units are measured in billions.
As can be inferred from the data, the number of Indian has been increased relentless from 2000 and it would be non-stop in the future, while although the population in China has witnessed a grow tendency till now, it would decline. In the last year, the number of people in India would overwhelm that of China.
In 2000, there are only 1000 billions Indian, whereas about 1250 billions residents was the starting point of China. The figure of India has been rising dramatically, which now, 2019, is standing at more than 1300 billions and it would keep rising and would peak at 1600 billions in 2050.
The number of people in China has seen an upward trend and there are about 1400 billions recently. After crossing the figure of India at roughly 1450 billions in 2030, the Chinese figure would decline slowly. Eventually, there would be 1400 billions Chinese in 50 years later.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 139, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'century' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'centuries'.
Suggestion: centuries
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Line 5, column 189, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...h the population in China has witnessed a grow tendency till now, it would decline. In...
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Line 15, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...0 billions Chinese in 50 years later.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 1.00243902439 798% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 931.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 188.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95212765957 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36913603833 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563829787234 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.8683741405 43.030603864 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.444444444 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8888888889 22.9334400587 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 5.23603664747 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170620841695 0.215688989381 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.071812705279 0.103423049105 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0608817114484 0.0843802449381 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11241218733 0.15604864568 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0550053879713 0.0819641961636 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.2329268293 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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