The given line graph illustrates the ratio of people who was aged 65 and over from 1940 to 2040 in Japan, Sweden and America.
What stands out from the line graph is that both three different countries had a upward trend. In addition, Japan saw a period of having the smallest percentage of these people before it is predicted to rocket at the end of period.
In 1940, starting at a quite high point, America rank the first with about 9 percent, following by Sweden and Japan with lower proportion with roughly 7% and 5% respectively. Over the period of 40 years, USA was still the country with the highest percentage and bounced to less than a fifth. While Sweden leapt considerably to around 14% at the same point as America, Japan declined slightly to roughly 3 percent before witnessing a steady in more than 40 years.
Besides, Sweden is forecasted to overtake America to become the nation with the highest proportion of the elderly at about 19% during the period between 2020 and 2040. Both America and Japan are expected to have a significant surge to around 14 percent and 10 percent respectively. In the final stage of prediction, there is a dramatical change when Japan has an anticipation to rocket to more than a quarter. Furthermore, Sweden is also estimated to reach the second with 25 percent. It is America that is anticipated to soar to roughly 23%.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 80, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...that both three different countries had a upward trend. In addition, Japan saw a ...
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Line 4, column 355, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... there is a dramatical change when Japan has an anticipation to rocket to more th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, furthermore, if, second, so, still, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 33.7804878049 148% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1132.0 965.302439024 117% => OK
No of words: 240.0 196.424390244 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71666666667 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63148669429 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 106.607317073 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566666666667 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 348.3 283.868780488 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5450022586 43.030603864 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.909090909 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8181818182 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.90909090909 5.23603664747 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10472680991 0.215688989381 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0437212208473 0.103423049105 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0586516900951 0.0843802449381 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0851500002751 0.15604864568 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0554968557739 0.0819641961636 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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