Most university graduates earn more money than less well educated people. Some people argue that this means they should pay the full cost of their education. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
A majority of people believes that individuals with a higher degree deserve a higher pay than their counterparts without one.However, not everyone agrees with the idea of a mandatory return of a college loan that was barrowed while studying.There are many reasons to support this point of view as will be explained below.
There are various reasons why university graduates should earn more money when compared to those who have chosen to work right after high school rather than pursuing their academic degree.
Often times, university graduates have to invest a cosiderable amount of time and effort into gaining their qualifications.They had to undertake a long period of study to aquire knowledge, skills and training required for important jobs.For instance,doctors are required to complete a university and usually a minimum of two year training to be able to work in a medical workforce.Therefore, it seems that it is reasonable for university graduates to make more money than other less qualified individuals.
Apart from the reasons mentioned above, there are many reasons for which college graduates should not be required to pay the full costs of their education.
Many people believe that professionals with high qualifications are an important asset to society. Doctors, lawyers and engineers are contributing to health, legal affairs and the development of our infrastructure.If people were not encouraged into such professions we could find ourselves in a situation of skills shortage.
Imposing college costs entirely on individuals would definitely deter many young people from going to university in the fist place.
Moreover, those graduates will contribute to the wellfare of the general public by paing taxes when they start to work.
To conclude, professions which are crucial to society and require from an individual a significant commitment are deserving not only higher salaries but also incentives so they can be debt free when they graduate.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 126, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: However
...pay than their counterparts without one.However, not everyone agrees with the idea of a...
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Suggestion: There
...e loan that was barrowed while studying.There are many reasons to support this point ...
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Suggestion: They
...ffort into gaining their qualifications.They had to undertake a long period of study...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
...nd training required for important jobs.For instance,doctors are required to comple...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , doctors
...required for important jobs.For instance,doctors are required to complete a university a...
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Line 4, column 381, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Therefore
... be able to work in a medical workforce.Therefore, it seems that it is reasonable for uni...
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Suggestion: If
...d the development of our infrastructure.If people were not encouraged into such pr...
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Line 6, column 214, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...d the development of our infrastructure.If people were not encouraged into such pr...
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Line 8, column 66, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
... will contribute to the wellfare of the general public by paing taxes when they start to work....
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Line 9, column 111, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
... an individual a significant commitment are deserving not only higher salaries but also incen...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, apart from, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1672.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42857142857 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17371084796 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594155844156 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 120.039602519 49.4020404114 243% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 185.777777778 106.682146367 174% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.2222222222 20.7667163134 165% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.55555555556 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.38176352705 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229794450979 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0885400136507 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0430948461588 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0955895908178 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0409151796165 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.3 13.0946893788 163% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.51 50.2224549098 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 11.3001002004 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.81 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 126, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: However
...pay than their counterparts without one.However, not everyone agrees with the idea of a...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 242, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: There
...e loan that was barrowed while studying.There are many reasons to support this point ...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 123, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: They
...ffort into gaining their qualifications.They had to undertake a long period of study...
^^^^
Line 4, column 237, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
...nd training required for important jobs.For instance,doctors are required to comple...
^^^
Line 4, column 249, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , doctors
...required for important jobs.For instance,doctors are required to complete a university a...
^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 381, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Therefore
... be able to work in a medical workforce.Therefore, it seems that it is reasonable for uni...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 214, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: If
...d the development of our infrastructure.If people were not encouraged into such pr...
^^
Line 6, column 214, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...d the development of our infrastructure.If people were not encouraged into such pr...
^^
Line 8, column 66, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
... will contribute to the wellfare of the general public by paing taxes when they start to work....
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 111, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
... an individual a significant commitment are deserving not only higher salaries but also incen...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, apart from, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1672.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42857142857 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17371084796 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594155844156 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 120.039602519 49.4020404114 243% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 185.777777778 106.682146367 174% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.2222222222 20.7667163134 165% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.55555555556 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.38176352705 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229794450979 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0885400136507 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0430948461588 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0955895908178 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0409151796165 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.3 13.0946893788 163% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.51 50.2224549098 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 11.3001002004 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.81 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.