The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
Write at least 150 words.
The lines graph illustrates the number of form of transport in the United
Kingdom from 1974 to 2002 by four mean of transport.
Overall, there are millions of vehicles was wildly change over the period shown. It is clear that the quantities of modes of convey by road, water and rail increased slightly while by pipeline was a downward trend in UK.
In 1974, people used pipe hit the lowest point shift in 2 million tones compare to transforming goods via highway to 70 million tones higher than aqua and railway to around 40 million tones. From 1978 to 1988, the number of rail dropped slowly to 30 million tones whereas three others deliver almost unchanged.
Between 1994 and 1998, English used water to move items fell down to 50 million tones and the rail reached the bottom to approximately 22 million tones. In the year 2002, the line was gradually decline to around 20 million but the water, roadway and railroad still continuing went up to over 60
- The diagram below shows the process by which bricks are manufactured for the building industry Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 78
- The line graph below shows the percentage of tourists to England who visited four different attractions in Brighton.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.Write at least 150 words. 85
- Some people think that it is best to live in a horizontal city while others think of a vertical city. Discuss both view and give your opinion. 56
- Writing task 1: Internet users as percentage of population. 84
- percentage of Uk people using internet 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 74, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...umber of form of transport in the United Kingdom from 1974 to 2002 by four mean o...
^^^
Line 5, column 194, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'declined'.
Suggestion: declined
...n the year 2002, the line was gradually decline to around 20 million but the water, roa...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, still, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 793.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 169.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69230769231 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32900190021 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.662721893491 0.547539520022 121% => OK
syllable_count: 223.2 283.868780488 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.9232096969 43.030603864 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.285714286 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1428571429 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.28571428571 5.23603664747 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106741848231 0.215688989381 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0544318222073 0.103423049105 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0750864408507 0.0843802449381 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0894269235308 0.15604864568 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0730293425082 0.0819641961636 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.2329268293 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.5 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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