The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The line graph shows the number of product transported in four transport types in the UK from 1974 to 2002. It is obvious from the data that road is the most popular transportation method in this period.
To begin with road and pipeline, there was a fluctuation in road transportation from 1974 to 1982. Then, goods transportation in road increased dramatically between 70 and 82 million tonnes over a decade and dropped slightly below 80 million tonnes in 1995. After that, there was a upward trend in road transportation which almost hit a peak at 100 million tonnes in 2002. For Pipeline, it started at 5 millions tonnes in 1974 which is the lowest point of all transportation. It had a upward trend between 1974 and 1995 until it reached a peak at 22 million tonnes and stayed the same until 2002.
Moving on to water and rail, both of them started about 40 million tonnes but rail was a gradual higher than water in 1974 until there was the same amount of transportation at 40 million tonnes in 1978. Later, water transportation still increased to almost 60 million tonnes and declined moderately over five years and jumped considerably from 52 to 62 million tonnes in 2002, while, rail transportation fluctuated moderately and hit a lowest point at 24 million tonnes between 1978 and 1995. There was a significant growth from the lowest point to over 40 million tonnes.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 281, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...n tonnes in 1995. After that, there was a upward trend in road transportation whi...
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Line 3, column 484, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...est point of all transportation. It had a upward trend between 1974 and 1995 unti...
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Line 5, column 435, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...portation fluctuated moderately and hit a lowest point at 24 million tonnes betwe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, still, then, while, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 33.7804878049 139% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1143.0 965.302439024 118% => OK
No of words: 239.0 196.424390244 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78242677824 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82912026962 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.47280334728 0.547539520022 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 314.1 283.868780488 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.1215183057 43.030603864 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.3 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9 22.9334400587 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 5.23603664747 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17260417492 0.215688989381 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0942541294123 0.103423049105 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0899951783219 0.0843802449381 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160158244691 0.15604864568 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.082809463513 0.0819641961636 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.2329268293 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 61.2550243902 120% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.