the graph below shows the quantity of goods transported in the uk between 1974 and 2002.

The rendered line graph depicts the information regarding about the amount of materials transported in the united kingdon between 1974 and 2002.The data has been caliberated in million tonnes.

Overall,maximum goods are transported by the road and minimum number of goods are transported by pipelines.

It is crystal clear from the line graph that in the year 1978 goods are transported by pipelines is increased as compare to the 1974 by approximately 10% and between the year 1982 and 1994 it is constant that is near about 22%. After that it is decreased and then become 20% in between the years 1994 and 2002.Hwever,transported by the water is flow in the same manner that is in the by pipelines but its value is double as compare to goods that is transported by the pipelines.

On delving deeper into the graph ,it can be clearly seen that water and rail tranported 40 units in the year 1974 .

Votes
Average: 6.7 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...erials transported in the united kingdon between 1974 and 2002.The data has been ...
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Suggestion: The
...e united kingdon between 1974 and 2002.The data has been caliberated in million to...
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Line 1, column 179, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a million'.
Suggestion: a million
...d 2002.The data has been caliberated in million tonnes. Overall,maximum goods are tr...
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Line 3, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , maximum
...aliberated in million tonnes. Overall,maximum goods are transported by the road and m...
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Line 5, column 29, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...pelines. It is crystal clear from the line graph that in the year 1978 goods a...
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Line 5, column 134, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...ines is increased as compare to the 1974 by approximately 10% and between the yea...
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Suggestion: Hwever
... 20% in between the years 1994 and 2002.Hwever,transported by the water is flow in the...
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Line 5, column 319, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , transported
...n between the years 1994 and 2002.Hwever,transported by the water is flow in the same manner...
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Line 5, column 371, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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... by the water is flow in the same manner that is in the by pipelines but its valu...
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Suggestion: ,
...nes. On delving deeper into the graph ,it can be clearly seen that water and ra...
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Line 7, column 114, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ail tranported 40 units in the year 1974 .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, regarding, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 759.0 965.302439024 79% => OK
No of words: 156.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86538461538 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06669212545 2.65546596893 115% => OK
Unique words: 82.0 106.607317073 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525641025641 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 216.9 283.868780488 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 22.4926829268 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.5832740635 43.030603864 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.8 112.824112599 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.2 22.9334400587 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 1.69756097561 648% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331640454453 0.215688989381 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.18018017897 0.103423049105 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474338096653 0.0843802449381 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191096175835 0.15604864568 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0619254508997 0.0819641961636 76% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.2329268293 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.93 61.2550243902 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.56 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.9970731707 131% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.