The graph below shows the way people of some country invested their money during the years 2001-2006.
The bar graph elucidates the amount of money invested in bonds or stocks in some country in 2001 to 2006.
It is observed from the graph that both investment categories increased over the projected periods but with more preference in investing in stocks than those of bonds.
At the beginning of the period, 100 billions of dollars invested in bonds while 270 billion invested for stocks. Over the next years the level became similar, with both components standing between 120 and 220 billion. However, there was a drastic increase for stock investments in 2004 where 289 billion of money was collected. Meanwhile, the investment on bonds grew from 157 billion to 162 billion from 2003 to 2004. This trend continued until 2005 - there was a fast growth rate for stock market while a steady growth trend for bond market. In 2005, 170 billion of money was gathered in bonds whilst 297 billion of money was recorded for stocks. The amount of money collected in stock market in 2006 was 311 billion compared to 188 billion for bonds.
- The following diagram shows how greenhouse gases trap energy from the Sun Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown in the diagram 97
- The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. 60
- The pie charts compare the percentage of carbohydrates protein and fat with three different diet programs 90
- The chart below shows the number of travellers using three major airports in New York City between 1995 and 2000. 60
- The chart shows the number of mobile phones and landlines per 100 people in selected countries. 67
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Need to catch up the main features. Look:
for stocks: 2001, 2002, 2003 are in the same level; while 2004, 2005, 2006 are in the same level;
for bonds: //2001, 2002; //2003, 2004; //2005, 2006 are in the same level;
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