The graph below shows the way people of some country invested their money during the years 2001-2006.
The bar graph elucidates the amount of money invested in bonds or stocks in some country in 2001 to 2006.
It is observed from the graph that both investment categories increased over the projected periods but with more preference in investing in stocks than those of bonds.
At the beginning of the period, 100 billions of dollars invested in bonds while 270 billion invested for stocks. Over the next years the level became similar, with both components standing between 120 and 220 billion. However, there was a drastic increase for stock investments in 2004 where 289 billion of money was collected. Meanwhile, the investment on bonds grew from 157 billion to 162 billion from 2003 to 2004. This trend continued until 2005 - there was a fast growth rate for stock market while a steady growth trend for bond market. In 2005, 170 billion of money was gathered in bonds whilst 297 billion of money was recorded for stocks. The amount of money collected in stock market in 2006 was 311 billion compared to 188 billion for bonds.
- Many people are using credit cards or loans to run up huge personal debts that they may be unable to repay. It should be therefore be made more difficult for individuals to borrow large amounts of money. What are your opinions on this? 60
- The charts below show the levels of participation in education and science in developing and industrialised countries in 1980 and 1990. 70
- The chart below shows the amount spent on six consumer goods in four European countries.Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. 60
- The chart below shows the percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of educational setting in the UK in 2010. 80
- The graph shows the worldwide market of the mobile phone market for sales in the years 2009 and 2013. 80
flaws:
Need to catch up the main features. Look:
for stocks: 2001, 2002, 2003 are in the same level; while 2004, 2005, 2006 are in the same level;
for bonds: //2001, 2002; //2003, 2004; //2005, 2006 are in the same level;
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