The graph gives information about coffee production in 4 different countries from 1990 to 2010

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The graph gives information about coffee production in 4 different countries from 1990 to 2010.

The provided bar chart illustrates the production of coffee produced by three different nations during the period of 20 years starting from 1990.
Looking at the graph, it is clearly seen that, there are increases in the coffee production manufactured by Brazil, Indonesia, and Vietnam. By contrast, the opposite trend was true for the amount of coffee produced by Colombia. The production of coffee produced by Brazil was the highest in 1990, while the lowest figure in the chart was for Vietnam.
The amount of coffee manufactured by Brazil was in the first position with 0.7 million tonnes, which was 5 times as high as that of Vietnam in 1990, during Indonesia produced 0.2 million tonnes at the same time. The period from 1990 to 2010 witnessed increases in the amount of coffee produced by Brazil, Indonesia, and Vietnam. In 2010, the figure for Brazil increased threefold compared to the year 1990, reaching a peak at 1.9 million tonnes. The figure for Indonesia gained 0.4 million tonnes, overtaking Colombia to become the second position, and the figure for Vietnam achieved 0.3 million tonnes.
Colombia ranked the second position with 0.6 million tonnes in 1990. In the next 20 years, a significant fall was seen in the amount of coffee produced by Colombia, which decrease nearly threefold compared to the year 1990 and tuned it become the third position

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... high as that of Vietnam in 1990, during Indonesia produced 0.2 million tonnes at...
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...ed 0.2 million tonnes at the same time. The period from 1990 to 2010 witnessed incr...
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...ak at 1.9 million tonnes. The figure for Indonesia gained 0.4 million tonnes, ove...
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... compared to the year 1990 and tuned it become the third position
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, second, third, while, as for

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1144.0 965.302439024 119% => OK
No of words: 228.0 196.424390244 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01754385965 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52524953132 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.451754385965 0.547539520022 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 330.3 283.868780488 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8931975385 43.030603864 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.4 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.23603664747 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200014108984 0.215688989381 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104003372746 0.103423049105 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0697497446223 0.0843802449381 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146884002796 0.15604864568 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0547985762072 0.0819641961636 67% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.2329268293 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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