The graph gives information about Dubai Gold Sales in 2002
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph presents the total amount of gold sold in each month throughout the year of 2002 in Dubai. Units are measures in millions of Dirhams.
The most apparent pattern to be seen from the graph is that with the exception of the first 3 months in which the number of gold sales increased, it went through a significant fall and a slight fluctuation during the year before ended at the same level which it started at.
The gold sales stood at 200 millions of Dirhams in January and then rose to a high o approximately 350 in March. From this point of time, there was a dramatic drop in the amount of gold sold over the following 4 months to minimally above 100 millions in July. The period of time between July and October witnessed a small fluctuation in the gold sales, which virtually evened out in the last quarter of the year and finished at its beginning level at 200 millions of Dirhams.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 61, Rule ID: WITH_THE_EXCEPTION_OF[1]
Message: Use simply 'except' or 'except for'
Suggestion: except; except for
...ttern to be seen from the graph is that with the exception of the first 3 months in which the number ...
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Line 3, column 25, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '200 million'.
Suggestion: 200 million
...it started at. The gold sales stood at 200 millions of Dirhams in January and then rose to a h...
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Line 3, column 264, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...nimally above 100 millions in July. The period of time between July and October witnessed a sm...
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Line 3, column 451, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '200 million'.
Suggestion: 200 million
... and finished at its beginning level at 200 millions of Dirhams.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 737.0 965.302439024 76% => OK
No of words: 166.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.43975903614 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4201952489 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584337349398 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 216.9 283.868780488 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.8230762294 43.030603864 176% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.833333333 112.824112599 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6666666667 22.9334400587 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.16666666667 5.23603664747 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0913954134808 0.215688989381 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0475615090142 0.103423049105 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0349762952348 0.0843802449381 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0696463505164 0.15604864568 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0161164308222 0.0819641961636 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.45 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.77 11.4140731707 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.