The graph on the right shows the way of people of somecountry in invested their money during the years 2001 - 2006.
The data regarding individuals money investment in stock market in some country between the year 2001 and 2006 is picturized by the given column graph.
On having an overall, it is apparent that, the money investment in both bonds and stocks are continuously follow the escalation trend.
Upon scrutinizing the graph, it is vivid that bonds accounted for 210 billion of cash outlay in 2001. which tend to be highest and after that it was consistently went up then after two years in 2003 it reached at 227 billion. To add on this, funding in bonds experienced a biggest climbing in 2004 by 60 billion. In 2005 and 2006 bonds observed 297 billion and 311 billion investment respectively.
In case of backing in stocks also witnessed an endless surg up in 2001 untill 2006. In first two years money investing in stocks was not more than 123 billion. After coupled year stock speculation was approximately similar with 167 billion. Moreover, in rest of years investment seen a slight difference by just about 8 billion.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 107, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'followed'.
Suggestion: followed
... both bonds and stocks are continuously follow the escalation trend. Upon scrutiniz...
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Line 5, column 103, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Which
...for 210 billion of cash outlay in 2001. which tend to be highest and after that it wa...
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Line 5, column 272, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...d on this, funding in bonds experienced a biggest climbing in 2004 by 60 billion....
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Line 7, column 85, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...an endless surg up in 2001 untill 2006. In first two years money investing in stoc...
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Line 7, column 161, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...n stocks was not more than 123 billion. After coupled year stock speculation was appr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, moreover, regarding, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 852.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 174.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89655172414 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73423126498 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632183908046 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 233.1 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.9407297407 43.030603864 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.2 112.824112599 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4 22.9334400587 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 5.23603664747 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211799688197 0.215688989381 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0919889472974 0.103423049105 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0664629877419 0.0843802449381 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147587552034 0.15604864568 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0703058634082 0.0819641961636 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.2329268293 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 61.2550243902 130% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.