The graph show the consumption of 3 spreads from 1981 to 2007
The line graph illustrates some striking similarities of margarine, butter and low fat and reduced spreads were used between 1981 to 2007.
Overall, the consumption of margarine and butter decreased over the period given, while low fat and reduced spreads, it rose.
At the start of the period , butter was the most popular spread, it began at around 140 grams in 1981 and then reached at peak approximately 160 grams in 1986 before falling dramatically to about 50 grams in 2007. Likewise, approximately 90 grams of margarine was eaten in the first year after which the figure fluctuated slightly and reduced rapidly to 40 grams in the final years.
In the other hand, the consumption of low fat and reduced spreads began at 10 grams in 1996 before jumping significantly to over 80 grams in 2001 and then fell slightly to approximately 70 grams between 2001 and 2007.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 27, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...it rose. At the start of the period , butter was the most popular spread, it ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, likewise, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 735.0 965.302439024 76% => OK
No of words: 148.0 196.424390244 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96621621622 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48791127476 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72539419602 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 79.0 106.607317073 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533783783784 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 207.9 283.868780488 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 37.6478419036 43.030603864 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.0 112.824112599 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.6 22.9334400587 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.2 5.23603664747 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170772329246 0.215688989381 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0999855630376 0.103423049105 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0773643966151 0.0843802449381 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11762892758 0.15604864568 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0696081432051 0.0819641961636 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.2329268293 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 10.3012195122 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.14 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 40.7170731707 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.