The graph show the price of bananas in 4 different countries from 1996 to 2004.
The line graph give information about the rated of bananas in 4 different homelands about eight years.
It is clear that rated of bananas has dropped significantly from 1996 to 2004. While in 1996 rated of bananas in Japan is highest among 4 countries but in 2004 decline.
Look at the line graph in 1996. It can be seen that rated of bananas in USA is the lowest among 4 different countries with a figure of 1 dollar per kilogram, but this figure rose to 1,3 dollar per kilogram in 2004. Meanwhile, only 2,5 dollars per kilogram of price bananas in the Japan, but this 8 years ago increased significantly have number 3 dollars per kilogram.
With 2 other countries among 4 countries are France and Germany, in 1996 have number highest price of bananas is 2 dollars per kilogram in France. But to in 2004 that number unchanged keep the same number. With price of bananas in Germany is 1,5 dollars per kilogram but in 2004 has increase a bit about 1,8 dollars per kilogram. So, it can be seen that the price of bananas in 4 different countries have highest number in Japan or France than Germany and USA.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 79, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'number the highest'.
Suggestion: number the highest
...es are France and Germany, in 1996 have number highest price of bananas is 2 dollars per kilog...
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Line 4, column 400, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'have the highest'.
Suggestion: have the highest
...ice of bananas in 4 different countries have highest number in Japan or France than Germany ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 906.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 201.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50746268657 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47188092193 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.432835820896 0.547539520022 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 273.6 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9077441917 43.030603864 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.6 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.4 5.23603664747 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.363639025088 0.215688989381 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.177324510583 0.103423049105 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0767013441607 0.0843802449381 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.245377609776 0.15604864568 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0797981138367 0.0819641961636 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.2329268293 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 11.4140731707 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.67 8.06136585366 83% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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