The pie charts below show the online shopping sales for retail sectors in New Zealand in 2003 and 2013.
The pie chart give information about the home shopping sales for retail sectors in New Zealand in 10 years.
It is clear that the mail order in New Zealand in 2013 of film/music is dramatically. But with clothes in 2013 is a downward trend.
Look at the first pie chart in 2003. It can be seen that the percentage of online shopping in the tourism segment is the highest among the four segments with a figure of 36%. Meanwhile, the shortest is books have a number is 19%. Second only to tourism this year is clothing with a figure of 24%. Film/music have just a little bit taller with a number is 21%.
Look at the second pie chart, the online shopping sales for retail sectors in New Zealand in 2013. With the film/music segment have a number highest compared to other segments of 33%. Meanwhile, on clothes have a number lowest is 16% significantly reduced compared to 2003 and book have a number lowest is a little higher than 22%. In contrast, on travel has a larger number than two segments above, and have a number of 29%.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 320, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, second, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 843.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 189.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.46031746032 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43897553552 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.481481481481 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 244.8 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.0592901719 43.030603864 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.25 112.824112599 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.75 22.9334400587 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312506095196 0.215688989381 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135452936368 0.103423049105 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.200662647461 0.0843802449381 238% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.232885474459 0.15604864568 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.135032967853 0.0819641961636 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 13.2329268293 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 61.2550243902 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.3012195122 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.29 11.4140731707 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.72 8.06136585366 83% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.