The graph show the price of bananas in 4 different countries from 1996 to 2004

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The graph show the price of bananas in 4 different countries from 1996 to 2004.

The line graph give information about the rated of bananas in 4 different homelands from 1996 to 2004.
It is clear that rated of bananas has dropped significantly from 1996 to 2004. While in 1996 rated of bananas in Japan is highest among 4 countries but in 2004 decline.
Look at the line graph in 1996. It can be seen that, price of bananas in USA is lowest among 4 countries with a figure of 1 dollar per kilogram. Meanwhile, rated of bananas in Japan increased significantly have number 3 dollars per kilogram and that country is the country with the highest figures, ranked first in the 4 countries. Ranked second in the 4 countries are France with a figure rose is 2 dollars per kilogram. In contrast, just only than 0,5 dollar per kilogram compared USA is Germany.
Look at the line graph in 2004 price of bananas in 4 different countries. However, Japan has dropped significantly is 1,5 and that number equal to the figures of Germany in 1996. Meanwhile, in France does not increase and stays the same number but that country is the country with the highest figure in this year. Germany increased but not highly about 1,8. Finally, USA still the country lowest among 4 countries has number about 1,2. So, it can be seen that price of bananas have sold more in Japan and France than USA and Germany.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 231, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... significantly have number 3 dollars per kilogram and that country is the country...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, look, second, so, still, while, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1076.0 965.302439024 111% => OK
No of words: 235.0 196.424390244 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57872340426 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48063573388 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.4 0.547539520022 73% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 323.1 283.868780488 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.4837117696 43.030603864 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.8571428571 112.824112599 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7857142857 22.9334400587 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.23603664747 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.39888332348 0.215688989381 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.161198971654 0.103423049105 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.129206437792 0.0843802449381 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.307641397653 0.15604864568 197% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0909479857541 0.0819641961636 111% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 13.2329268293 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 11.4140731707 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.51 8.06136585366 81% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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