The line graph shows the books had been bought in four countries (Germany, France, Italy and Austria) during the period between 1995 to 2005. Units are measured in US millions dollars.
It can be clearly that people who live in Germany spend a highly amount of million dollars about 95 that was the first country of all, while France was the second country spend amount 65 million dollars.
In terms of the Austrian had been dramatically increasing of the amount of money which spend on book, however the Italian had been a slight increasing from 1995 and until 2005 the amount risen about 11 million dollars only, in addition to Italy is the lowest country spent money in booking.
Over all, Germany had been the first place in this comparison, whereas the France is the second, Austria is third and Italy of the end.
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- You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.The following bar chart gives statistics showing the aspects of quality of life in five countries.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.Wri 11
- The graph shows the amount of money spent on books in Germany, France, Italy and Austria between 1995 and 2005. 73
- Nowadays families move to different countries for work. Some people think it has a negative effect on children, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 78
- Popular events like the football world cup and other international sporting occasions are essential in easing international tensions and releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way. 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 57, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('highly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('amount') instead of another adjective.
...y that people who live in Germany spend a highly amount of million dollars about 95 that was th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, second, so, third, whereas, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 678.0 965.302439024 70% => OK
No of words: 144.0 196.424390244 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70833333333 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.46410161514 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.16448429977 2.65546596893 82% => OK
Unique words: 84.0 106.607317073 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 193.5 283.868780488 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 82.125270167 43.030603864 191% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.6 112.824112599 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.8 22.9334400587 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.4 5.23603664747 237% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339414145113 0.215688989381 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.170768297262 0.103423049105 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.17993210096 0.0843802449381 213% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195010976165 0.15604864568 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.148497949599 0.0819641961636 181% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.2329268293 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.44 61.2550243902 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.63 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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