this graph shows the consumption of fish and some different kind of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004
summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
this graph has interesting information about how fish and other different meats are consumed by people in one European country.
it is pretty clear that there was obvious changes during the time.chicken consumption almost increased during the 1979 and 1989. However, in some points it decreased but this decade was a great start for this consumption.Before 1994, chicken gained enough fans to insure the increase in consumption. Although, beef and lamb were used highly, the consumption decreased during 1984 and 2004.
people tend to change their their ideas about eating chicken through these shown years is which because of the reasonable price compared to its nutrition.beef and lamb consumption have almost same changes.However, beef is more used per person per week than lamb. The most intrigued part of the graph is fish consumption which is highly stable through 1979 and 2004, though, if we look closer we can find out people consume fish more in 1979 than in 2004.
In all, it is safe to say people pay more attention to the price than nutrition since the meats with low prices have been consumed more and they changed the most during these years.
- this graph shows the consumption of fish and some different kind of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 78
- Some people believe it is imperative for individuals living in developed nations to reduce their energy consumption and lead a more sustainable lifestyle, given the evidence for global climate change. Others believe that such drastic lifestyle changes are 16
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 5.60731707317 268% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 970.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 193.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02590673575 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68651725531 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621761658031 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 273.6 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.0274652742 43.030603864 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.571428571 112.824112599 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5714285714 22.9334400587 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.71428571429 5.23603664747 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151437772137 0.215688989381 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0785061396892 0.103423049105 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0723176992118 0.0843802449381 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106057456224 0.15604864568 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0794274723292 0.0819641961636 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.2329268293 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 61.2550243902 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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