The graph shows data about the annual earnings of three bakeries in London, 2000-2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph provides information about the amount of money which was earned by three bakeries in London every year from 2000 to 2010. Overall, over the entire period of ten years from 2000, there was a considerable increase in the income of both Robbie's Bakery and Bernie's Buns, while the earnings of Lovely Loaves decreased.
Looking at the graph in more detail, in 2000, the amount of money earned by Lovely Loaves was highest, at 81,000 pounds. In the same year, it was about 26,000 pounds higher than the figure for Robbie's Bakery. The income of Bernie's Buns was lowest, at 20,000 pounds in 2000. From 2000 to 2006, the earnings of Robbie's Bakery remained the same at 55,000 pounds, while the figure for Lovely Loaves fluctuated between 60,000 pounds and 45,000 pounds. In 2006, Robbie's Bakery earned nearly as much money as Lovely. The income of Robbie's Bakery reached a peak of 110,000 pounds in 2010. The earnings of Lovely's Loaves decreased sharply to 40,000 pounds in 2008. The figure then stayed at the same level in the last two years.
In terms of Bernie's Buns, its figure remained stable at below 40,000 pounds from 2000 to 2006. After four years, there was a significant increase of 30,000 in the figure for Bernie's Buns.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...e earnings of Lovely Loaves decreased. Looking at the graph in more detail, in ...
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...eased sharply to 40,000 pounds in 2008. The figure then stayed at the same level in...
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... the same level in the last two years. In terms of Bernies Buns, its figure rem...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1033.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 216.0 196.424390244 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78240740741 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.10695965269 2.65546596893 79% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.481481481481 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 283.5 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 3.36585365854 267% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.8956209592 43.030603864 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.0833333333 112.824112599 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.75 5.23603664747 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141086099073 0.215688989381 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.068696234223 0.103423049105 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0766261933886 0.0843802449381 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114312834928 0.15604864568 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0859847202543 0.0819641961636 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 61.2550243902 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.87 8.06136585366 85% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.