The graph shows the life expectancy of people living in Asian regions from 1950 and predicts life expectancy until 2300 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The graph shows the life expectancy of people living in Asian regions from 1950 and predicts life expectancy until 2300. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.

The illustration given by the line chart provides information about the longevity of residents living in Asian areas from 1950 and predicts the length of life of people until 2300.

From an overall perspective, the life expectancy of citizens increases in each regions between 1950 and 2300. Specially, other Eastern Asian areas are predicted to be the longest longevity in Asia.

As can be seen obviously from the graph, in 1950, Eastern Asian people's life expectancy was at about 52 years, compared to roughly 45 years of people in Western Asia's longevity and under 40 years for remaining regions. Over 10 years period witnessed a dramatical rise in all areas, particularly, the length of life of the Chinese climbed noticeably from under 40 years to nearly 70 years.

Looking into the future, the longevity of all regions in Asia is predicted to grow gradually, with a rising to about 83 years in other Eastern Asia in 2300. This figure will be much more than those of other areas, which accounted for around 73 years. By 2300, the length of life of all Asian regions is expected to increase to over 100 years for the Eastern Asian, about 95 years for people in China and just over 90 years for the remaining areas.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 33.7804878049 142% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1022.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 212.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82075471698 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48125761932 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528301886792 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 301.5 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0 43.030603864 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.75 112.824112599 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5 22.9334400587 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 5.23603664747 19% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267390188468 0.215688989381 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135376136461 0.103423049105 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.099239628865 0.0843802449381 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206552680606 0.15604864568 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0660577512282 0.0819641961636 81% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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