The bar chart illustrates how many boys and girls participated in different sports activities in English town in one year (2012).
Overall, it is clearly seen that boys participated in such sports activities more than girls. While the vast amount of boys preferred football, girls, chose swimming. Clearly, Hockey was the least popular sports activity among both sexes.
The most popular sports activity within boys was Football (60 participants), while three times less (20) girls participated in football. However, both sexes showed almost the same numbers in swimming and tennis. As for swimming, more girls (50) than boys (40) swam, while this pattern more or less reversed in tennis, boys (50) and girls (just under 40).
As for other sports activities, ten girls more played Badminton than boys (40 as opposed to 30), while boys again more cycled than girls (about 38 and 20 accordingly). Surprisingly, hockey, was the least popular sport among both genders, while about 15 boys and 10 girls participated in.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 158, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to swim'.
Suggestion: to swim
...f boys preferred football, girls, chose swimming. Clearly, Hockey was the least popular ...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, however, if, while, as for, more or less
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 33.7804878049 47% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 842.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 164.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13414634146 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58677481166 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603658536585 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 233.1 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 1.07073170732 654% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.2449502093 43.030603864 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.5555555556 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2222222222 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88888888889 5.23603664747 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309433098319 0.215688989381 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130318564196 0.103423049105 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0706720459337 0.0843802449381 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203133035335 0.15604864568 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0662681242142 0.0819641961636 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.2329268293 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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