The given line graph illustrates the quantity of children in two opposite genders participating in different six types of sporting activities in an English town in the year 2012.
Overall, it can be seen from the graph that hockey was the least popular sport enjoyed by both sexes.Additionally, the biggest gender gap was recorded in football.
Looking at the graph for details, football was the most common sporting game played by boys with approximately 60 children compared with only around 20 girls attending this sport. Moreover, the number of boys playing hockey was about 15 children which was slightly higher than that of girls (just under 10). The figures for boys and girls preferring tennis were 50 and 38 children, respectively, while the quantity of boys going cycling (37) was almost double the figure for girls (20).
The pattern tends to reverse in regard to the other sports. The number of girls favored swimming was 50 children which was higher than the figure for boys 10 children. Furthermore, around 40 girls played badminton in contrast to only 30 boys.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 101, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Additionally
...ast popular sport enjoyed by both sexes.Additionally, the biggest gender gap was recorded in...
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Line 4, column 60, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... reverse in regard to the other sports. The number of girls favored swimming was 50...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, look, moreover, while, in contrast, in contrast to, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 902.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 179.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03910614525 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71013642175 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620111731844 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 247.5 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2988341461 43.030603864 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.75 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.375 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.125 5.23603664747 193% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323683497067 0.215688989381 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129011546593 0.103423049105 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.074700961439 0.0843802449381 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178697327446 0.15604864568 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0778124498229 0.0819641961636 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.2329268293 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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