The graph shows the number of cases of X disease in Someland between 1960 and 1995

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The graph shows the number of cases of X disease in Someland between 1960 and 1995.

The graph gives information about Someland's affected people, who suffered from X disease, over a 35-year period from 1960 to 1995.

Overall,it is clear that the number of people who was affected by this illness rose dramatically until the mid seventies, before dropping to zero in the last of given period.

At the beginning of the period, the number of cases of X disease in this area stood at 100, remaining stable at this level for next five years. X disease spreaded, with figure increasing steadily and reaching a peak of 500 cases in 1975. From this time until next 5 years, no changes was not seen in this regin about the number of people having the disease.

suddenly, a larg dropping was saw in this number, with figure declining to zero by 1980. from this time until the last year of given period, no person was not get X disease.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
... period from 1960 to 1995. Overall,it is clear that the number of people who ...
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Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Suddenly
...ber of people having the disease. suddenly, a larg dropping was saw in this number...
^^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 31, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'sawed', 'sawn', 'seen'.
Suggestion: sawed; sawn; seen
...se. suddenly, a larg dropping was saw in this number, with figure declining t...
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Line 13, column 90, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: From
... with figure declining to zero by 1980. from this time until the last year of given ...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 708.0 965.302439024 73% => OK
No of words: 151.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68874172185 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36051611183 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576158940397 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 205.2 283.868780488 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.667406084 43.030603864 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.142857143 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5714285714 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.285714285714 5.23603664747 5% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166485799905 0.215688989381 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0757714846659 0.103423049105 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563866242279 0.0843802449381 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0957810648904 0.15604864568 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0626987109628 0.0819641961636 76% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.2329268293 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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