The graph shows the percentage of overweight men and women in Australia between 1980 and 2010.

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The graph shows the percentage of overweight men and women in Australia between 1980 and 2010.

The provided bar diagram illustrates the proportion of over heavy males and females in a particular country, namely Australia over 30 years. Starting from 1980.

At the first glance, the percentage of men and women who were overweight had an enormous fluctuation. Especially, the men in Australian was higher than women per decade.

In the first period, the overweight men and women rates stood at 40 and 33% respectively. Meanwhile, the figure for formal considerably increased by 8% while with 11% of the woman in the 10 next years.

Regarding the proportion of men hit a free fall to roughly 60% in 2010, after undergoing a substantial growth to 65% in 2000. Additionally, in comparison with the percentage of women which remained unchanged between 2000 and 2010 at approximately 50%. Both men and women saw a noticeable turnaround in the last period.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, regarding, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 719.0 965.302439024 74% => OK
No of words: 142.0 196.424390244 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06338028169 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.45201032557 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0373264745 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.654929577465 0.547539520022 120% => OK
syllable_count: 208.8 283.868780488 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.8050275799 43.030603864 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.8888888889 112.824112599 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7777777778 22.9334400587 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.23603664747 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335442757824 0.215688989381 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118848713089 0.103423049105 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0674865810325 0.0843802449381 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164450760254 0.15604864568 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0729675943724 0.0819641961636 89% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.2329268293 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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