The graph shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.
The graph includes information about many changes in the proportion of elderly people aged 65 or more in three different countries during the past 80 years with projection until 2040.
Overall, it indicates that the percentage of people aged 65 and more has increased and it is predicted to rise until 2040 in all three countries.
At the beginning of the given period, only 5% of Japanese population had 65 or more years old, whereas for two other countries this figure was slightly higher about 7% for sweden and 9% for the US. sweden and the USA began a rising trend, with figures rising to nearly 15% in 1990. By contrast, Japan’s figure dropped to about 3% in 1960, stood at this level for about 25 years, before rising and reaching 5% in nearly 2000.
The percentage of elderly in Japan has risen by 2.5% and predication show that this trend will continue until 2030, before occurring an increase of 17% in the last decade. this proportion in two others, which had similar trend since 1940, followed a different path of growth while both of them will rising and reaching nearly 20% in last year.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 173, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
... an increase of 17% in the last decade. this proportion in two others, which had sim...
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Line 13, column 300, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'rise'
Suggestion: rise
... path of growth while both of them will rising and reaching nearly 20% in last year. ...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, whereas, while, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 930.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 195.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76923076923 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4175231428 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589743589744 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 263.7 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 34.6150845966 43.030603864 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.857142857 112.824112599 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8571428571 22.9334400587 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.71428571429 5.23603664747 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20533277884 0.215688989381 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0941460347501 0.103423049105 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0974666905476 0.0843802449381 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149221510206 0.15604864568 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0939331066604 0.0819641961636 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 61.2550243902 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.