The graph shows seasonal water consumption in four towns
The presented line graph illustrates the amount of water, which is consumed in four towns in 4 seasons.
As can be seen that town C had the largest amount of water usage among four towns whilst town D consumed the lowest amount of water.
The amount of water utilization in town C was the highest over 4 towns,made up at 70 in spring , however, in the next season the figure of town C dramatically decreased to a bottom at just above 10 . In the following season, it increased to approximately 45 in winter and remained virtually stable until spring.
On the other end of scale, town D had the lowest amount of water consumption over the whole period, which was 25 in summer and slightly decreased to nearly 10 in autumn. Moreover, the statistic of town D continued to reach the bottom at 8 in winter then increased in the next term of year. Regarding to town B and C, it fluctuated between 30 and 50
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: , made
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Suggestion: ,
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
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Line 5, column 348, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...B and C, it fluctuated between 30 and 50
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, moreover, regarding, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 742.0 965.302439024 77% => OK
No of words: 166.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46987951807 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66366221054 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572289156627 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 217.8 283.868780488 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4759235524 43.030603864 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.0 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7142857143 22.9334400587 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 5.23603664747 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.360174666172 0.215688989381 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.157064895942 0.103423049105 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0933614156858 0.0843802449381 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230686970058 0.15604864568 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0608266996172 0.0819641961636 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.2329268293 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 61.2550243902 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 11.4140731707 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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