The graph shows seasonal water consumption in four towns
The presented line graph illustrates the amount of water,which is consumed in four towns in 4 seasons.
As can be seen that town C had the highest amount of water usage among four towns whilst town D consumed the lowest amount of water.
The amount of water usage in town C was the highest over 4 towns,made up at 70 in spring , however, in the next season the figure of town C dramatically decreased to a bottom at just above 10 as same as town D. In the following season, it increased to approximately 45 in winter and remained stable until spring.
On the other end of scale, town D had the lowest amount of water consumption over the whole period, which was 25 in summer and slightly decreased to nearly 10 in autumn. Moreover, the statistic of town D continued to reach the bottom at 8 in winter then increased in the next term of year. Regarding to town B and C, it fluctuated between 30 and 50
- The graph shows seasonal water consumption in four towns rewrite alam 67
- The graph shows seasonal water consumption in four towns rewrite alam 67
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- The graph shows seasonal water consumption in four towns 67
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: , which
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Suggestion: , made
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Suggestion: ,
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...B and C, it fluctuated between 30 and 50
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, moreover, regarding, so, then, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 736.0 965.302439024 76% => OK
No of words: 169.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.3550295858 4.92477711251 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62616591343 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550295857988 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 217.8 283.868780488 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9866884022 43.030603864 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.142857143 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1428571429 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 5.23603664747 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.365675345904 0.215688989381 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.161688098566 0.103423049105 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0939757854721 0.0843802449381 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.237683395627 0.15604864568 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.054918083937 0.0819641961636 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.5 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.3 11.4140731707 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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