The graphs below compare the average weekly earnings of male and female graduates and non graduates

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The graphs below compare the average weekly earnings of male and female graduates and non-graduates.

The graphs provide the comparison of weekly income on average, for both genders, who have academic degrees and non-academic degrees.
In general, working-age ranges for men and women shows that the highest average income in a week is dominated by males in both graduation and non-graduations category.

Male payment in a week dramatically rises from age ranges 16 to 59 for both academic learner and non-academic learner, reaching high of earnings is evident at the ages 50-59 by graduations approximately 710 pounds. In the two last levels, particularly 40-49 and 50-59 more or fewer changes have been shown for non-graduations.

In contrast, it is clearly seen that, for female, wages remain mostly the same from ages 25 to 59 for those who have the graduated degree at around 410 pounds while ages lower than 25 is just at about 300 pounds. Non-graduating women earnings reach 350 pounds in ages 25-29. Meanwhile, the weekly salary of the age groups 50 to 59 stands at 300 pounds.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, while, in contrast, in general

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 834.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 165.0 196.424390244 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05454545455 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92586075489 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630303030303 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.6932310684 43.030603864 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.142857143 112.824112599 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5714285714 22.9334400587 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.85714285714 5.23603664747 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248983096989 0.215688989381 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136239702978 0.103423049105 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100997777858 0.0843802449381 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177686914618 0.15604864568 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0869901061191 0.0819641961636 106% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.4329268293 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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