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The graphs depict the total number of medals won by the top five countries in the summer and winter Olympics. The winter Olympics graph accurately reveals the details on the number of gold, silver and bronze medals bagged by each country.
Overall, leading countries of the summer Olympics won the highest number of medals compared to the medals in winter Olympics. Great Britain and France were new addition to the list in summer Olympics replacing Norway and Canada from winter Olympics.
Norway with 370 followed by United States with 310 are the two major countries with maximum number of medals. Though Canada overtook Russia in the final score of medals, Russia with a relatively higher count of gold medal was supposed to take over the 4th position. Thus, Canada lost the 4th position with a narrow lead of about 20 extra gold medals by Russia.
The summer Olympics, had few different talented countries to grab the victory. United states with a total of 2500 medals tops the list with a clean sweep. Russia with 1800 and Germany with 1600 medals climbed up for the next rankings. Norway which topped the winter Olympics seems to have lost the top five category in summer Olympics. Great Britain and France made their dashing entry in to the top five with a notable count of medals.

Votes
Average: 9 (11 votes)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 307, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'category' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'categories'.
Suggestion: categories
...lympics seems to have lost the top five category in summer Olympics. Great Britain and F...
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Line 4, column 437, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...op five with a notable count of medals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, thus

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1073.0 965.302439024 111% => OK
No of words: 222.0 196.424390244 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83333333333 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.16428668146 2.65546596893 82% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504504504505 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 321.3 283.868780488 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.8076193409 43.030603864 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.4166666667 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.666666666667 5.23603664747 13% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70975609756 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285311527159 0.215688989381 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133794477825 0.103423049105 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.131768258053 0.0843802449381 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223940583781 0.15604864568 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.134161505697 0.0819641961636 164% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.2329268293 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.