THE GRAPHS BELOW SHOW THE PERCENTAGE OF PEOPLE HOLDING FULL DRIVING LICENCES IN GREAT BRITAIN BY AGE AND SEX
THE GRAPHS ILLUSTRATE THE INFORMATION ABOUT PROPORTION OF PEOPLE HAVING A FULL DRIVING LICENCES IN BRITAIN BY COMPARING THEIR AGE AND SEX.
IN THE YEAR OF 1975 AND 1976 IT CAN BE SEEN THAT THE HIGHEST PROPORTION OF MEN WHO HAD DRIVING LICENCE AT THE AGE OF 30-39 WHICH WAS APPROXIMATELY 82% WHILE THE LOWEST PROPORTION IN THE SAME YEAR WAS BETWEEN THE AGE GROUP OF 17-20,HOLDING NEAR ABOUT 38% .HOWEVER IN THE YEAR OF 2006,IT CAN BE SEEN THAT ,50-59 AGE GROUP HAD THE HIGHEST PROPORTION WHICH WAS NEARLY ABOUT 90% WHILE THE LOWEST PROPORTION IN THE SAME YEAR WAS REPRESENTED BY THE AGE GROUP OF AGAIN 17-20 HAD ALMOST 38% IN THE YEAR OF 2006
ON THE OTHER HAND , ACCORDING TO GRAPHS IN THE YEAR OF 1975 AND 1976 , THE HIGHEST PROPORTION OF WOMEN WHO HAD THE SAME DRIVING LICENCE AT THE AGE GROUP OF 40-49 WITH ALMOST 45% WHILE THE DATA SHOWN IN THE SAME FOLLOWING YEAR THE LOWEST PROPORTION WAS BETWEEN THE AGE GROUP OF 70 YEARS AND ABOVE. IN THE YEAR OF 2006 DATA SHOWN THAT , AGAIN THE HIGHEST PROPORTION WHO HOLD DRIVING LICENCE WAS THE AGE OF 40-49 YEARS , ALMOST 80% HOWEVER , THE LOWEST PERCENTAGE WAS SAME FOR THE AGE GROUP OF 70 YEARS AND ABOVE
OVERALL ACCORDING TO GRAPHS FOR MEN FOR ALL THREE YEARS HAD THE HIGHEST PROPORTION AS COMPARED TO WOMEN FOR ALL THE SAME FOLLOWING YEARS
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- THE GRAPHS BELOW SHOW THE PERCENTAGE OF PEOPLE HOLDING FULL DRIVING LICENCES IN GREAT BRITAIN BY AGE AND SEX 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...LY ABOUT 90% WHILE THE LOWEST PROPORTION IN THE SAME YEAR WAS REPRESENTED BY THE ...
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... AGE OF 40-49 YEARS , ALMOST 80% HOWEVER , THE LOWEST PERCENTAGE WAS SAME FOR THE ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, while, all the same, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 3.97073170732 327% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1063.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 236.0 196.424390244 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50423728814 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35484398595 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 85.0 106.607317073 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.360169491525 0.547539520022 66% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 299.7 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 8.94146341463 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 78.0 22.4926829268 347% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 276.725294993 43.030603864 643% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 354.333333333 112.824112599 314% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 78.6666666667 22.9334400587 343% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 15.6666666667 5.23603664747 299% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183750151452 0.215688989381 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.209655421863 0.103423049105 203% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.138261366507 0.0843802449381 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166054624816 0.15604864568 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.144420800182 0.0819641961636 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 39.1 13.2329268293 295% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 17.69 61.2550243902 29% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 30.2 10.3012195122 293% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.0 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.71 8.06136585366 120% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 11.4329268293 236% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 33.2 10.9970731707 302% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.