The bar charts provide information about the proportions of individuals in two sexes who buy some kinds of music albums, namely Pop music, Rock music and Classical Music, in different ages. It is also worth noting that the percentages of man purchasing those albums are larger than those of women. Furthermore, while people in the range of 25 to 34 years old are inclined to prefer rock and pop music, the older tends to interested in classical music.
To specify, rock music attracts the highest proportions of both male and female at approxiamately 27% and 18% respectively, followed by pop music and classical music. Additionally, there was a similar trend in the percentages of people who buy pop albums and rock albums in terms of age with the biggest percentages of music lovers being from 25 to 34 years old and the smallest of those figure for listeners being over 45 years old. By contrast, the classical music appeals the highest proportion of individuals who are above 45 years old.
- The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities 56
- The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities 78
- The charts below give Information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy In 2000 and projections for 2050. 78
- the graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries. 73
- Cycling has many benefits, yet in some countries there is a decrease in the number of people using bicycles as their main form of transportation. Why is it happening? Give suggestions how to encourage people to use bicycles again. 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 248, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...in the percentages of people who buy pop albums and rock albums in terms of age w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 825.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 170.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85294117647 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77458186008 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547058823529 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.7255780133 43.030603864 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.5 112.824112599 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.3333333333 22.9334400587 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 5.23603664747 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148962713849 0.215688989381 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0782638826699 0.103423049105 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0303879119016 0.0843802449381 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128688042947 0.15604864568 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0181714599682 0.0819641961636 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.2329268293 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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