The graphs below show the types of music albums purchased by people in Britain according to sex and age.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
You should write at least 150 words.
The charts give information on the proportion of individuals from different age ranges and genders in Britain buying three types of music albums, including pop, rock and classical music.
Overall, there are more male album purchasers than females in all three genres. While people aged 16 to 44 prefer to buy rock and pop albums, these albums are the least purchased types by the older generation (45+). Instead, listeners above 45 years old would mostly buy classical music albums. Classical music albums also attract young music enjoyers ( 25-34 years old) as well, but the proportion of teenagers buying them is the lowest among the three album types.
In terms of genders, there are obviously more men buying albums than women in every category, but both genders favor rock music albums. Considering pop music, men account for nearly 30% of all buyers whereas the proportion of women is merely 20%. There is also a similar gap between male and female purchasers in the category of rock music, where men’s percentage surpasses that of women by 10%. Classical music albums attract the least buyers from two genders, respectively nearly 10% for males and just above 5% for females.
Pop and rock music albums suit various ages ranging from teenagers (30%) to the 25-34 age group ( over 30%) and 35-44 years old listeners (nearly 30%), except for middle-aged music enthusiasts with just approximately 10%. Middle-aged music listeners make up 20% of people who buy classical albums, but the percentage of teenagers purchasing classical music falls below 5%. A similar pattern can also be seen in the 35-44 age group, where below 5% of them buy classical-related albums. However, classical music albums still gain 15% of 25-34 years old buyers
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 349, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...albums also attract young music enjoyers 25-34 years old as well, but the proport...
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Line 4, column 94, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rom teenagers 30% to the 25-34 age group over 30% and 35-44 years old listeners n...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, still, thus, well, whereas, while, except for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1451.0 965.302439024 150% => OK
No of words: 286.0 196.424390244 146% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07342657343 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 3.73543355544 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51735867994 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 106.607317073 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51048951049 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 422.1 283.868780488 149% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2177074603 43.030603864 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.615384615 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.61538461538 5.23603664747 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159454598206 0.215688989381 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.071355234451 0.103423049105 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0338506309871 0.0843802449381 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112627007299 0.15604864568 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0188962379913 0.0819641961636 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 40.7170731707 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 349, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...albums also attract young music enjoyers 25-34 years old as well, but the proport...
^^
Line 4, column 94, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rom teenagers 30% to the 25-34 age group over 30% and 35-44 years old listeners n...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, still, thus, well, whereas, while, except for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1451.0 965.302439024 150% => OK
No of words: 286.0 196.424390244 146% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07342657343 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 3.73543355544 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51735867994 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 106.607317073 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51048951049 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 422.1 283.868780488 149% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2177074603 43.030603864 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.615384615 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.61538461538 5.23603664747 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159454598206 0.215688989381 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.071355234451 0.103423049105 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0338506309871 0.0843802449381 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112627007299 0.15604864568 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0188962379913 0.0819641961636 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 40.7170731707 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.