The graphs give information about average house prices in England and other parts of the world

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The graphs give information about average house prices in England and other parts of the world.

The given graphs illustrate the average cost of owning house in England compared to London, which is its capital in two years: 1995 and 2013 and in other areas of England in 2013.
In general, it is clearly seen in the first graph that the house prices in London were much higher than the whole country from 1995 to 2013. As a result, the second graph shows that compared to other areas London's house prices were still the highest, while North East had a lowest price in 2013.
As can be seen from the first graph, in 1995, the house prices in London reached exactly 200000. Meanwhile, it costed about 130000 for houses in England, just over a half. In 2013, the house prices in London increased significantly, over double the average prices in England.
The second graphs shows that in 2013 it took 400000 for citizens in London to buy a house. Besides, the house prices in South East, South West, North West were cheaper with about 320000, 230,000, 200000 respectively. In addition, it was only over 100,000 to own a house in Midlands, while the lowest price was 100,000 in average in North East.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, if, second, so, still, while, in addition, in general, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 908.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 196.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63265306122 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.1821948074 2.65546596893 82% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515306122449 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 250.2 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.6945296522 43.030603864 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.888888889 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7777777778 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.11111111111 5.23603664747 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324113836902 0.215688989381 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.154923422526 0.103423049105 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0649989790842 0.0843802449381 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223431597664 0.15604864568 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0577418944956 0.0819641961636 70% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.4329268293 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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