The graphs show figures relating to hours worked and stress levels amongst professional in eight groups. Decribe the information shown to a university or collage lecturer.
The graphs illustrate how many hours is done by workers in eight professions and how they have to experience stress levels per week.
In general, the number of work hours of employees in each field vary dramatically. It is easy to see from the two charts that people work for a long time, which do not mean that they have to suffer from more stress related to illness than others.
In terms of an average number of hours, writers, doctors, movie producers and businessmen work for the longest time. In particular, the work time of businessmen is the largest figure, 70 hours each week which twice that of programmers. The next longest work time is among film producers, 60 hours per week. In contrast, lecturers spend the lowest time to work with nearly 25 hours halving the figure of doctors.
When it comes to stress levels, professionals in the given occupations have to undergo. Although lecturers just work for the number of hours at least per week, they have to face the highest level of stress, accounting for 25%. By contrast, during the working process, just 5% of programmers suffer from illness, which is the lowest percentage among all areas. It is interesting to notice that writers and lawyers present equal proportions of getting illness because of tress at 8%.
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| 2019-07-09 | nguyen thi thu hien | 73 | view |
- for school children, their teachers have more influence on their intelligence and social development than their parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 73
- The media should include more stories which report good news. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 73
- The world would be a much poorer place without colour To what extent would you agree or disagree 89
- The media should include more stories which report good news. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 73
- Some people think that it is more effective for students to study in groups while others believe that it is better for them to study alone Discuss both views and give your opinion 77
Transition Words or Phrases used:
at least, in contrast, in general, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1064.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 220.0 196.424390244 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83636363636 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57115274659 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 106.607317073 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568181818182 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 305.1 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.0692022468 43.030603864 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.7272727273 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.36363636364 5.23603664747 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.13902439024 527% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19577531522 0.215688989381 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0767907619481 0.103423049105 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0416647504373 0.0843802449381 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124167172592 0.15604864568 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0195575798621 0.0819641961636 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.2329268293 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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