greenhouse effect on the temperature of the Earth
The diagrams illustrate how heat radiation reaches the Earth and the effect of it
with greenhouse gases on the temperature of the Earth.
Overall, the radiation from the sun is trapped by the greenhouse gases in the
atmosphere and heats the Earth.
The heat radiation created by the sun comes to the Earth and over a half of it is
absorbed by the Earth. A fifth of it is scattered and reflected by clouds, 6% of the
solar radiation scattered from the atmosphere and the others are absorbed by
atmosphere and clouds. Additionally, the absorbed radiation warms the Earth.
The Earth emits radiation and loses heat at night. Moreover, greenhouse gases
surrounding the Earth trap the radiation from the sun and reflect heat which
makes the Earth suitable for living.
Besides, polluted air emitted from factories may increase greenhouse gases, so
more solar radiation is trapped and more heat is reflected. As a consequence, the
temperature of the Earth becomes warmer and warmer.
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- The diagrams show the greenhouse effect on the temperature of the Earth Describe the process
- the diagrams show the greenhouse effect on the temperature of the Earth
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, may, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 836.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 163.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12883435583 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78123270742 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 74.0 106.607317073 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.453987730061 0.547539520022 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 244.8 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.7884417047 43.030603864 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.8888888889 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1111111111 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 5.23603664747 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 14.0 3.83414634146 365% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.358081454125 0.215688989381 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.179854786399 0.103423049105 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.139812825992 0.0843802449381 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147341212846 0.15604864568 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121190136109 0.0819641961636 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.2329268293 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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