The given bar chart illustrates the proportion of households which were possessioned or rented in England and Wales over the period 90 years from 1918 to 2011. Overall, it is clear that the percentage of rented accommodation showed downward trends compared with owned ones during the aforementioned period.
In 1918, just over 20 percent of England and Wales' citizens possessed their own houses, whereas slightly less than 80 percent of them was being in rented flats. However, the following 50 years showed opposite trends as the percentage of rented accommodation decreased significantly to 20 percent by the 1961. In contrast the rates of owned houses experienced huge increase to 50 percent by the same. It is interestengly, that 1971 demonstrated the similar marks in two types of living in households. After reaching similarities, the trends continue their trends. The proportion of household ownership reached a peak of at 70 percent in 1991 and was in this figure for the next 10 years. Meanwhile, the rates of rented households bottomed down in the same period of time.
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- The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014 Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant Write at least 150 words
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...oned or rented in England and Wales over the period 90 years from 1918 to 2011. O...
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Suggestion: contrast,
...ificantly to 20 percent by the 1961. In contrast the rates of owned houses experienced h...
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Suggestion: period
...ed households bottomed down in the same period of time.
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Suggestion:
...ttomed down in the same period of time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, whereas, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 904.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 176.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13636363636 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96882475982 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619318181818 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.4430107228 43.030603864 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.444444444 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5555555556 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.44444444444 5.23603664747 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.363682783637 0.215688989381 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118947522537 0.103423049105 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104838962749 0.0843802449381 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.315361830547 0.15604864568 202% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0813520028667 0.0819641961636 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.2329268293 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.