The diagram provides the information regarding the process of apple canned. Overall, it includes many steps in order to complete the process, it is started from piking the apple from trees end up with package when ready to sold in the market.
To begin with, apples are come from the apple tree where farmers picked by hand before transporting to the trucks. After that, all apples are washed by clean water, after identifying the quality it placed into the cold storage. then. apples is graded/ weighed. Next, apples is peeled,then corn are removed. Thus, apple is corned becoming a small part.
In addition in this process, it get canning process, next, the apple is sealing and it boiled in order to ensure that the cans are sterilized. After completing the labeling process it is sent to cold storage. Finally, it is dispatched to the market in order to sell the consumers.
In conclusion, this process includes many steps for getting good product. as a result , it gained a popularity in the market due to it durability.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...uality it placed into the cold storage. then. apples is graded/ weighed. Next, a...
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...lity it placed into the cold storage. then. apples is graded/ weighed. Next, apple...
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... graded/ weighed. Next, apples is peeled,then corn are removed. Thus, apple is corned...
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... is corned becoming a small part. In addition in this process, it get canning proces...
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...ll part. In addition in this process, it get canning process, next, the apple ...
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...rt. In addition in this process, it get canning process, next, the apple is sea...
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...ning process, next, the apple is sealing and it boiled in order to ensure that th...
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...to ensure that the cans are sterilized. After completing the labeling process it is s...
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...lusion, this process includes many steps for getting good product. as a result , ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, regarding, so, then, thus, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 860.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 176.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88636363636 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53161566024 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579545454545 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 263.7 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.1538707142 43.030603864 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.6666666667 112.824112599 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6666666667 22.9334400587 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.83333333333 5.23603664747 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 1.69756097561 707% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180125922787 0.215688989381 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0727804525992 0.103423049105 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631903854319 0.0843802449381 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.094232397 0.15604864568 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0655938922475 0.0819641961636 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.2329268293 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 61.2550243902 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.49 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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