The diagram illustrates how canned apples are manufactured through a simple process.
There are fourteen stages in the process of making canned apple slices, beginning with harvesting apples from apple farms and ending with delivering finished products-canned apples- to supermarkets.
It is clear from the diagram that at the first step, original fresh apples, the main raw material of the production, are collected by hand from apple gardens before being transported by a truck to a factory for sorting out the good quality apples that are later frozen in storage in which the temperature is set to less than 0*C. The cool apples are weighed and peeled off before getting their seeds or any hard parts near the seeds removed. They then are cut into small slices.
After the sliced apples are being mixed up with water, juice and syrup, the mixture is put into cans and sterilized all the harmful bacteria at the cooking stage. In the next two stages of the end, the pasteurized cans are labelled and stored at a cool temperature before getting dispatched to superstores for people who demand to purchase.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...manufactured through a simple process. There are fourteen stages in the process...
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...oducts-canned apples- to supermarkets. It is clear from the diagram that at the...
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.... They then are cut into small slices. After the sliced apples are being mixed ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 932.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 186.0 196.424390244 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01075268817 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59572208701 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634408602151 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 283.5 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 87.6481835615 43.030603864 204% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 133.142857143 112.824112599 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5714285714 22.9334400587 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.14285714286 5.23603664747 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286045274655 0.215688989381 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130342801375 0.103423049105 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113301773736 0.0843802449381 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203380537862 0.15604864568 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.098468987485 0.0819641961636 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.2329268293 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.