Ielts task 1: The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten-year period.
Attached photo file below.
The line graphs compare the number of Overseas Students and Local students in Australian universities between 2001 to 2010
Overall, It is clear that the local students are as many as the overseas students. However, foreign student enrollment is gradually increasing, which leads to a rise in the total number of overseas pupils.
In the year 2001, the commencing of foreign people applying for Australian universities is around over 10 thousand in 2001 and the total figure is just approximately 20 thousand. By contract, the commencing of local applying is 180 thousand freshmen and 40 thousand in a total of both new and old students.
Over the following 9 years, The data showed significant changes in the number of foreign's students who are 40 thousand 4 times as high as in 2001, which makes the total overseas student also increased the same. In addition, although the number of commencing local students slightly fluctuated during the period 9 years, the total number still increased dramatically with 600 thousand in 2010
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 100, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...nges in the number of foreigns students who are 40 thousand 4 times as high as in 2001,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, still, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 871.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 169.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15384615385 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83139649895 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514792899408 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 246.6 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 35.0162660615 43.030603864 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.166666667 112.824112599 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1666666667 22.9334400587 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.83333333333 5.23603664747 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25946546106 0.215688989381 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14040139789 0.103423049105 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0952772877322 0.0843802449381 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191103993203 0.15604864568 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0864709613795 0.0819641961636 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.2329268293 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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