The given table graph illustrate the information about earned money from coffee and banana in 1999 and 2004 in five different countries UK Switzerland and Belgium and Sweden
It can be clearly seen that Switzerland earned money from coffee in 1999 which was 3 million euros , while almost similar and earned money of fairtrade labelled from coffee by UK and Denmark which were 1.5 and 1.8 million euros there was least sold of coffee Belgium and Sweden. further the maximum money earned from coffee by UK in 2004 (20 million euros ) and Switzerland highest sales of fairtrade labelled coffee compared to others countries while Denmark Belgium and Sweden lowest can earn money from copy which was 2 and 1.7 and 1 million euros in 2004
Moving further the highest sold of Banana by Switzerland in 1993 and 2004 which were 15 million euros while almost equal UK and Belgium was sold bananas over the given period for Sweden and Denmark was also respectively.
Over all the highest sales of fairtrade labelled coffee and bananas by Switzerland as compared to other countries.
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...illustrate the information about earned money from coffee and banana in 1999 and...
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...coffee in 1999 which was 3 million euros , while almost similar and earned money ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 6.8 235% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 896.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 181.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95027624309 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39078555563 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 78.0 106.607317073 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.430939226519 0.547539520022 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 258.3 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 8.94146341463 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 60.0 22.4926829268 267% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 173.383966963 43.030603864 403% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 298.666666667 112.824112599 265% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 60.3333333333 22.9334400587 263% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 5.23603664747 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251259672209 0.215688989381 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.207262057795 0.103423049105 200% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0411858743147 0.0843802449381 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196874268489 0.15604864568 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0992208159435 0.0819641961636 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 32.0 13.2329268293 242% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 27.5 61.2550243902 45% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.3 10.3012195122 236% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.32 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 26.0 11.4329268293 227% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 26.0 10.9970731707 236% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 26.0 11.0658536585 235% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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