IELTS Task 1 Tables give information about sales of fairtrade labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries

Two tables show bananas and coffee’s sales number of fair-trade separately among 5 European countries in 1999 and 2004, including UK, Switzerland, Denmark, Belgium and Sweden.

2004 saw different improvements of both fair-trade coffee and bananas in all countries compared to 1999 except Denmark and Sweden. Specifically, the sales amount of fair-trade coffee in UK reached the largest among mentioned 5 countries in 2004. On the other hand, Switzerland took the largest sales of fair-trade bananas in 2004.

The country took the largest sales(1.8 millions of Euros) of fair-trade coffee in 1999 was Denmark, which increased by only 0.2 millions in 2004, the same as Sweden. UK’s sales number of fair-trade coffee improved mostly by 18.5 millions in 2004, up to 20 millions.

On the other hand, bananas were paid most in Switzerland in both 1999(15 millions) and 2004(47 millions), followed by UK with 5.5 millions and Belgium with 4 millions in 2004. However, the sales amount of fair-trade bananas decreased by 0.8 and 1.1 millions in Belgium and Sweden individually in 2004 instead of improvements happened in other countries.

Votes
Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 37, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '8 million'.
Suggestion: 8 million
... The country took the largest sales1.8 millions of Euros of fair-trade coffee in 1999 was ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 958.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 180.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32222222222 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84775740228 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 106.607317073 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.477777777778 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 255.6 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7158105191 43.030603864 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.75 112.824112599 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 5.23603664747 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237521541594 0.215688989381 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144637477761 0.103423049105 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646717845196 0.0843802449381 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187629433169 0.15604864568 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0736427448388 0.0819641961636 90% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 11.4140731707 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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