The two tables indicate the consumption of Fairtrade - labelled coffee and bananas in European nations in 1994 and 2004.
It can be seen clearly that the sales of coffee made a rise in the year after in all countries shown than the previous year. Particularly in England had a significant number of 20 millions of euros compared to 1.5 millions of euros by 1994. For Sweden and Denmark, there was just the same small change of 0.2 millions of euros from 0.8 to 1 and 1.8 to 2, respectively.
Meanwhile, the second table illustrates different tendency in 2 countries, which were still Sweden and Denmark, for possessing a decrease in their figures (from 1.8 to 1 and 2 to 0.9 in order). These two were separated from the others with strong increased rates. The UK continued to lead the top with a drastical leap of more than 3 times income higher (47 millions of euros from 15 millions of euros).
In conclusion, the UK had the largest amount of sales in both coffee and bananas for the later period while Sweden kept much tiny proportions and almost stayed below the ranks of other nations.
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- IELTS Task 1 Tables give information about sales of fairtrade labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 177, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '20 million'.
Suggestion: 20 million
... in England had a significant number of 20 millions of euros compared to 1.5 millions of euros...
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Line 2, column 212, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '5 million'.
Suggestion: 5 million
...r of 20 millions of euros compared to 1.5 millions of euros by 1994. For Sweden and Denmark, ...
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Line 2, column 307, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '2 million'.
Suggestion: 2 million
...ere was just the same small change of 0.2 millions of euros from 0.8 to 1 and 1.8 to 2, respe...
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Line 3, column 352, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '47 million'.
Suggestion: 47 million
...leap of more than 3 times income higher 47 millions of euros from 15 millions of euros. In co...
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Line 3, column 378, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '15 million'.
Suggestion: 15 million
...income higher 47 millions of euros from 15 millions of euros. In conclusion, the UK had the l...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, still, while, as for, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 895.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 194.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61340206186 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58206019401 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613402061856 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1903129079 43.030603864 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.875 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.25 22.9334400587 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.875 5.23603664747 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147732769967 0.215688989381 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0692822351483 0.103423049105 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109739707409 0.0843802449381 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124492604152 0.15604864568 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.128005129586 0.0819641961636 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.5 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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