Ielts task 1, Table
The table below shows the average hours and minutes spent by UK males and females on daily activities
The graph illustrates the average amount of time spent on daily routines by UK men and women.
Overall, it is obvious that both men and women spend most of their time on sleeping and doing all the entertainment activities. Besides, it takes women more time to do housework and take care of children than men while men spend more time on working and studying.
First, it takes men and women 8.04 and 8.18 hours to sleep respectively. Additionally, the number of hours used for all the leisure activities by men is 5.25 hours and this number for women is 4.53. Next, men say they spend 1.32 hour a day on travelling and 1.22 hour is said by women.
Men spend 3.45 hours everyday for their working and studying but only 2.26 hours is spent by women on the same purposes. In contrast, 3 hours is spent on doing housework by women, which is 2 times higher than men with 1.41 hour a day. Similarly, while women use 0.32 hour for taking care of children, men spend only 0.15 hour. Finally, it takes men 0.13 hour to do sports and this figure for women is 0.07 hour a day.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 168, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sure activities by men is 5.25 hours and this number for women is 4.53. Next, men...
^^
Line 4, column 23, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...s said by women. Men spend 3.45 hours everyday for their working and studying but only...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, finally, first, similarly, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 872.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 198.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.40404040404 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30482386301 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505050505051 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 249.3 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.3177262507 43.030603864 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.2 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9 5.23603664747 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125333762341 0.215688989381 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0746752353225 0.103423049105 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516895475928 0.0843802449381 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102941750511 0.15604864568 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0670070710154 0.0819641961636 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 61.2550243902 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.24 11.4140731707 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.73 8.06136585366 83% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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